I like it, looks to have potential.
I advise larger background, possibly more deterioration/damage to the face,
maybe a few cut scenes, bathroom, coffee/water cooler. then maybe a few progressive/looping images in the background, (calendar falling away) while the main guy may change a few times, holiday attire, maybe a smashing into a birthday cake, then one a sufficient time has passed he gets older, wasting away his life behind his desk, and thus dies......let me know if you require any help....I hope you expand on this